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Never After - The Storyline

by chorva


Romance #3601 published in English  |  Rate Storyline Rate this Idea »  |  Rate Storyline Comment - Review this Storyline »

Whenever I see the vastness of the sky, my whole existence is soak into unfathomable desperation and gloominess of how far I have strayed away from you. It is true, running away from you is like rossing the street blindfolded, in short- suicidal. It's really hard. My arms reach back to you, but my feet are dragging me farther.

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Abusive Relationship

June 19, 2009, 6:35 am

The wording is nice - although it doesn't tell me a lot about the plot - but I'm afraid it really puts me in mind of an abusive relationship. That may be the intention, or it may not be related to the plot at all, but these lines don't give me much to go off of as to what it is about. I hope you might resubmit a storyline that gives me a better idea of the plot, as I am intrigued.

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