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A Dance With Lachesis - The Storyline

by Tempestflare04

Fantasy #3990 published in English |

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...So Nisse walked out into the eerily pleasant, Tuesday air with his oilskin satchel in hopes that this place would lead him to brighter days. A new, enormous city sprawled out and towered over him..much like the merciless Shades of the Iryllisian [Ih-rihl-is-ee-uhn] Empire that destroyed his home seven years ago.

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June 28, 2009, 12:08 pm

It's very much open for development. I am new here and want to get a feel for the potential of this site. I look forward to working with others to create a good story and perhaps a friendship to boot.

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1 . Comment #409 on Review | November 18, 2009, 1:17 am

seems to be that there is already a little development on the story such as the characters past but it's pretty vague, how bout elaborating it a little further but in a short detailed sequence...