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Loveless Love - The Storyline

by maryShaw


Fantasy #52 published in English  |  Rate Storyline Rate this Idea »  |  Rate Storyline Comment - Review this Storyline »

In a land inhabited by fairies, anything is possible, except finding true love. The fairies are happy, productive, friendly and harmonious, however they all feel a need to love and be loved. Whenever they try to show the emotions associated with love, they are severely punished by the Fairy Queen, Eskira. The Fairy Queen was the first to inhabit the land and so, set the rules for all who fell under her rule. She is an unmistakably kind fairy, however, because of a heartache that never healed long ago, she cast a spell that made fairies and elves unable to experience love. She thinks that she's doing them all a favour by sparing them the hurt she experienced, but little does she know the importance of love. Of course the fairies complain and eventually, revolt against her. This causes all the opposite of love: anger, hatred, disgust, envy, greed, hedonism, etc. The Fairy Queen realizes that a world without love is ugly, dangerous and unpleasant, so she casts a spell that reverses her previous one. The fairies and elves learn to love and Queen Eskira, though never finding a soulmate, gains the respect and love of her followers.

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Quite interesting

September 30, 2008, 11:56 am

I really liked this idea and think you should start writing it if you havent already...
if it's wrote in an interesting way it could make for a very different nd interesting book with many lessons...

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Excelant and Charming

September 2, 2008, 10:16 pm

So invoking. This is what I would really like to read.
These characters are alive, it would be shame not to develop further their features.

Thumb up, and hope to see this story grow.

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Original idea

August 10, 2008, 10:29 pm

To me this seems like a very original idea. I imagine someone like Qeen Eskira could indeed do something like that when her own heart has been broken in the past.

The only suggestion I have for you is to give the land of the fairies a name, and I personally think it might be better if you gave some of the fairies a name as well. From whose point of view will this story be written?

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