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Ounous (English Version) - The Storyline

by Saverio


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Ounous

Once upon a time there will be (The typical Spanish expression expressed literally in English is “It was itself one time” (Erase una vez), it ´s of the fairly tales while “it will be once a time” is the literal translation of the expression but being expressed in future), a big city, which will rise above the sky. There will have a little house, derelict and middle ruined of half XX century.

-Do you have seen that house ruined of there? –A girl will ask.

-Naturally! It’s said that an invention will be tried, let’s go! – A boy will say.

They will go to the house, where a scientist will be.

-Hello, who are you? –The young people will say.

-My name is Escio and I’m scientist –This will say.

-What is this estrange junk? –The young people will ask.

-It’s an invention that is called generator of noumenic (of noumeno or the thing how it is itself, see Kant) waves, and it was invented by many friends of mine. – Escio will say proud.

-So that does it tend? – That boy will ask found estrange.

-The machine will throw some especial waves, and the noumeno will have been perceived in some hours. –Escio will explain.

After switch on the machine, a magnetic field will be formed in the house, and the noumeno will have been seen.

-What or who are you? I don’t see but I fell your presence, I perceive your electric energy, I listen your thoughts in my thoughts, and I know that in you, the past, the present and the future are one. –The three people will say simultaneously.

-My name is Ounous, and I don’t know what or who, I’m. –The Noumeno will say.

The three people (The girl, Escio and the boy) will have been living incredible experiences but never any thing like that.

-It’s incredible! You can materialize every material object, which we want! – Escio will exclaim.

Including (materialize something) out of this house. –Ounous will say.

Escio will crush of joy telling to the other people while the young people will leave.

-I want a mansion, a yacht, a plane, much money, food in abundance for the poor, particle’s accelerator, an observatory… -Escio will be asking without realize that Ounous will be caught in the House.

Much wrong will be cared with a high prize to pay.

-You have given us much but you have brought the memory and the knowledge of many of us. You have converted us in merchants of information for unlimited material power, which will be used by you for escape, but this is going to finish. –Escio will say convinced.

-You will finish Forgetful and electrocuted. –Ounous will say, carrying out its prediction.

-My last ours quickly will pass, without remember. –Escio will say to the end.

When it ´s going to escape, the young people will come with some books without end, they will put out the machine, defeating it with more (problem).

And abracadabra, this story will have been finished.

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