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Monarch'S Crown - The Storyline

by Camaden

Crime #65 published in English |

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Main Characters - Lyle and Rob.

Lyle is a professional thief and blackmailer. He blackmails Rob into working with him, and they proceed to steal art and valuable things while avoiding the police.

There are mentions that they've both been in prison before, but that's not the focus. Keep an eye on Rob slowly getting angrier and more desperate as time goes on - Lyle grates on his personality.

Show several of their exploits, and finally work Rob into setting a trap and trying to get Lyle to give up the secret that keeps Rob stuck with him.

Lyle will win - for the now.

Meanwhile, Rob's wife has hired someone to track Rob down, and Lyle has noticed.

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