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There Is No Sun And There Is No Sound - The Storyline

by dontforget1227


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I awake to see no light shining bright through my window. I awake to feel a empty beating and an empty room. I awake to hear the sound of the silence with all of its sorrow. I awake to smell the scent of something I know.
Something is missing. Something is not in its place. Something hurts. Something, something, that something is you.

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hilarious writting

November 11, 2009, 4:48 pm

feeling, emotion, captivating... it's the writing that talks to peple...
I love it!!

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November 11, 2009, 4:36 am

This poem is about realizing the importance of those whom you love. You most know how much they are worth once they are gone.

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